I would suggest that the Press Release link to a permanent R14 Release Notes page which would contain many of the details rather than linking to the home page which is subject to change over time.
I would suggest that said Release Notes be informative/neutral as distinct from a persuasive/enthusiastic Press Release.
I would suggest that said Release Notes near the beginning link to explicit download information for this release.
I would suggest that said Release Notes include an "Issues to be aware of" section.
One such issue would be that if you're using a non-TDE browser such as Firefox or IceWeasel you may want to change the applications/mailto handler from kmailservice to tdemailservice.
--Mike